Sunday, March 20, 2011

POV gun

You kept trying
to make me
'see'
but I assure you, I
have 20/20 vision
without your specs
and I
can
see
exactly what you can.

So you tried to make me
'under
stand'

Always standing a tad taller,
just a
bit,
barely noticeable
but an eye-strain
away.

But I reached my arms
above
my head and
fooled you
into thinking
that I am as tall
as I wish I was.

Your point of
view is
a bullet
and mine
is
the
gun.
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3 comments:

  1. Furree KattMarch 20, 2011 at 5:02 AM

    i can't even begin to explain how much i love everything you post on your blog!
    ♥

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  2. The Lady of Green OriginMarch 20, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Thank you! I appreciate that so much.

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  3. Jodie-Ann MucklerMarch 21, 2011 at 4:18 PM

    This is amazing. I really don't understand how this isn't a blog of note yet. -.-'
    I love, love, love the end where you say "Your point of
    view is
    a bullet
    and mine
    is
    the
    gun."
    Beautiful. <3

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